Talk:Kingsland station/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk)  12:10, 2 October 2010 (UTC)

Placing on hold, Arsenikk (talk)  12:10, 2 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Comments:
 * How about changing the first sentence to "Kingsland Station is a rail station on the New Jersey Transit's Main Line." Could you also link to train station.
 * Please mention the country
 * "Ticket Vending Machines" is not a proper noun and therefore not capitalized.
 * "Kingsland Station" is a proper noun and should therefore be capitalized.
 * Wye needs to be wikilinked.
 * There is some sort of syntax error with "Bloomfield s".
 * "daym" is not a word
 * "November 28, 1916" should have a comma after it, similarly "October 27, 1963".
 * The "Erie–Lackawanna Railroad" uses an endahs, not a hyphen.
 * Perhaps I've just missed it, but when did NJT/NJDOT take over ownership of the line itself (not just the station and the operations)?
 * I don't understand what you mean by "an average of 440 of over 1,000 people".
 * I do not understand the context of the see also link. Without an explanation, the reader is left guessing why exactly that station is a see also link.


 * I got most of the stuff.I will get the rest when I go home via the main line :PMitch32(Transportation Historian) 21:13, 3 October 2010 (UTC)
 * All done.Mitch32(Transportation Historian) 00:56, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
 * And Mitch scores another good article :) Arsenikk (talk)  11:12, 6 October 2010 (UTC)