Talk:Kirill Tolpygo

Intro Fuzziness (1st Paragraph)
The last sentence of the first paragraph reads "He was recognized for his works on condensed matter theory, the theory of phonon spectra in crystals, electronic structure and defects in insulators and semiconductors, and biophysics." There are three "and's" in the list, when there should be at most two. Did Tolpygo study the defects in biophysics or did he study biophysics in general? If it is the former, the sentence should read "He was recognized for his works on condensed matter theory, the theory of phonon spectra in crystals, electronic structure and defects in insulators, semiconductors and biophysics." If the later is true, the sentence should be "He was recognized for his works on condensed matter theory, the theory of phonon spectra in crystals, electronic structure, biophysics and defects in insulators and semiconductors."Belac Athanasius (talk) 16:47, 13 November 2012 (UTC)