Talk:Kirk–Holden war/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 16:19, 20 January 2022 (UTC)

Happy to review. Two points for the start, more to follow:


 * in the state of North Carolina in 1870 in the United States – bit confusing to have a place followed by a date followed by a place. Maybe we don't need "United States" here?
 * Revised to put the date last. I'm loathe to not specify where North Carolina is, as per WP:Global we can't expect that everyone will know it's an American place.
 * 1st North Carolina Troops and 2nd North Carolina Troops – maybe "1st and 2nd North Carolina Troops"? --Jens Lallensack (talk) 16:19, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Done. -Indy beetle (talk) 22:03, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
 * sending North Carolina Adjutant-General A. W. Fisher to Richmond, Virginia speak with General Edward Canby, – is a "to" missing here?
 * I don't think so...seems like a filler word. I could revise the sentence, as it's a long one.
 * Upon arriving, Kirk learned that congressional candidates James Madison Leach and William L. Scott were holding a debate in the courthouse. – Why where these arrested, have they been on some list?
 * Only Leach, the Democrat, was detained, but Scott vouched for him and had him released. The sources don't say whether Leach was on a list.
 * The resolution requires approval from the House in order to be put into effect. – But was it approved in the end?
 * Media coverage ends there, and I don't think the House every completed this step, so this is where it stands; Holden has never been completely pardoned.
 * That's all, very nice work; I like the background section that places everything into context. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 16:33, 21 January 2022 (UTC)
 * I've responded to your comments. -Indy beetle (talk) 18:38, 21 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank's, promoting now. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 17:48, 22 January 2022 (UTC)