Talk:Kiss & Cry (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 03:17, 2 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Everything looks good!

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 * Also looks good!

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 * Since this article seems to be written in American English, "favourable" should actually be "favorable"

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 * I don't think you need to mention what each of the mixers and recorders are managed by; it seems pretty unnecessary to me

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 * Add "was" before "finally served as..."
 * Rest looks great

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 * Fix "song "sound like"... (wrong tense here)
 * "analysed" --> "analyzed"
 * You can summarize and/or paraphrase some of these quotes so this section isn't so dependent on them

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 * Good

Critical response

 * "labelling" --> "labeling"
 * Please change to "Japanese music editor Random J highlighted it as one of the album's best tracks, praising it for being "funky" and "bouncy"."

Accolades and recognitions

 * change title; "recognitions" isn't a word
 * Once again, "recognitions" isn't a word
 * "favourite" --> "favorite"
 * Is 24/25 the lowest position? Or was the poll ranking the top 24 positions?

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 * You use "chart week" and "charting weeks" quite frequently; you can change it up a bit if you please
 * Remove "on the singles chart" in the second to last sentence

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 * "Billboard" needs to be italicized
 * Good elsewhere

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 * Add the year to August 2 please
 * Quote with Ref #38 needs to be a bit shorter; you can summarize/paraphrase it please

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 * Add the year to August 31 please

Chart and certifications

 * Shouldn't the "Japan Yearly Chart" be placed in the "Year-end" format?

End of GA Review:
Another good article, on hold for seven days; thanks! Carbrera (talk) 20:13, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
 * All done and dusted Regarding the recording part in the background section, I removed the mixing/editing part but left the studio recording in. CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk &middot;&#32;contribs} 04:41, 3 June 2016 (UTC)