Talk:Klaxons/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Crowz  RSA  01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
 * There are four deadlinks. Crowz  RSA  01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
 * In reference 35, BBC News should not be linked. Crowz  RSA  01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
 * The lead needs to be expanded to meet WP:LEAD. Crowz  RSA  01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
 * "Musical style" needs additional verification and sources. Crowz  RSA  01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Actually, every section needs additional verification. Crowz  RSA  01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Reference 22 is a bare URL. Crowz  RSA  01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
 * There is inconsistency with dating. Crowz  RSA  01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Inconsistency between NME and NME.com. Crowz  RSA  01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
 * There should not be any one-sentence paragraphs. Crowz  RSA  01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
 * File:Klaxons Queens May Ball 2007.jpg needs additional information. Crowz  RSA  01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Please see here, for some great fixes on your references. Crowz  RSA  01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
 * The article really needs to go through a thorough copyediting. Crowz  RSA  01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)


 * Result
 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * I am quick-failing this article because it meets the third decree on the quick-fail criteria. I think that if you copyedit the article, and fix all the reference problems, it would pass GAN if it were renominated. Sorry, Crowz  RSA  01:28, 8 December 2010 (UTC)