Talk:Knickerbocker and Arnink Garages

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General copy edits needed
While browsing today, I noticed the Building section of this article could use some copy editing to spruce it up. Nothing is glaringly incorrect; however, the text generates some confusion between the two companies mentioned. Otherwise, there are words used repeatedly (while, above, etc.) when another choice of phrase might add more clarity in several sentences. For now, I’ll leave this here and, if someone doesn’t beat me to it, I’ll come back to it later. HiTrish (talk) 00:05, 7 June 2020 (UTC)