Talk:Koi... Mil Gaya/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Non-free use rationale looks good.
 * "It starred" "It stars" (MOS:TENSE)
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:03, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "written by Rakesh Roshan, who wrote" sounds weird. maybe "conceived by"?
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:03, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "49th Filmfare Awards".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:03, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

 * The plot section is 550 words so it passes WP:FILMPLOT.
 * "paralyse" "paralyze" (consistency)
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:02, 18 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "one of their group behind" "a group member behind" or "a member of their group behind"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:02, 18 June 2021 (UTC)


 * That's everything I could find in the plot section. #Cast looks good as well.

Production and soundtrack

 * "Zinta was given with the role" "Zinta was given the role"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:17, 18 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "Rakesh Roshan recommended her to play" "Rakesh Roshan recommended she play"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:17, 18 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "finished writing of the film's screenplay" "finished writing the film's screenplay"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:17, 18 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Couldn't find any major issues in #Soundtrack.

Release and reception

 * Marketing and release can be their own section.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:18, 18 June 2021 (UTC)


 * You can also move #Box_office over #Critical_response.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:18, 18 June 2021 (UTC)


 * #Accolades is short enough to also become a subsection.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:18, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

Legacy and sequel

 * Section title: Sequel Sequels
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:18, 18 June 2021 (UTC)