Talk:Kojo Aidoo/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:35, 5 August 2016 (UTC)

Will review this. MWright96 (talk) 17:35, 5 August 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ''([[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|appropriate
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ''([[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|appropriate
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ''([[WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE|appropriate

use]] with suitable captions)'':
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * High school career


 * Wikilink Loyola High School
 * I know what MVP means, but spell it out in full for non-sports experts


 * College career


 * Spell out the CIAU's full name and place the acronym in parentheses in the first mention
 * Same for OUA
 * "Aidoo described the 26–7 lost against the Manitoba Bisons as" - loss
 * "McMaster athletic hall of fame" - The first letters of each remaining word should be captialized
 * "CIAU offensive player of the week" - ditto


 * Professional career


 * The CFL should be spelt out in full and the acroynms in parentheses
 * Wikilink 2003 CFL draft and Edmonton Eskimos


 * Winnipeg Blue Bombers


 * "Aidoo was signed by the Winnipeg Blue Bombers in October 2013" - don't you mean October 2003?
 * Who is Tom Europe?


 * Hamilton Tiger-Cats


 * Link Ottawa Citizen and Hamilton Spectator and italize both since they are newspapers
 * "newcomer Les Mullings competed with Aidoo to become backup running backup." - I don't understand the text I've bolded. Please clarify.
 * "Head coach Greg Marshall was released prior to the 2007 season after two disappointing seasons," - repititon of the word seasons


 * References


 * No dead links due to all sources being offline

On hold until issues are resolved. MWright96 (talk) 07:06, 6 August 2016 (UTC)
 * I've done a lot of what needed to be done, however the only mentions I could find of the Hamliton Spectator were in the references.  Crash Under  ride  07:36, 6 August 2016 (UTC)
 * All points have been actioned and I can happily promote this to GA. MWright96 (talk) 16:39, 6 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Just as a note Apparently, The Hamilton Spectator usually provides their name with the "The" included. ~ Rob 13 Talk 17:07, 6 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Also, please fix these: Help:CS1 errors. Print source cites don't need and should not use an access-date. – Finnusertop (talk ⋅ contribs) 17:25, 6 August 2016 (UTC)
 * I haven't accessed them as print sources; I accessed them through an online database, but if I were to provide a URL, it wouldn't work for anyone but the students at my university. Should I still remove the access dates? ~ Rob 13 Talk 17:27, 6 August 2016 (UTC)
 * I see, I've ran into that problem sometime as well. I'd rather not include the access-dates without urls since it produces that cs1 error. Per Template:Cite web/doc you could say these are stable sources so an access-date is not needed. The other option that comes to mind is to link to the main page of the online database you have used and keep the access-dates. – Finnusertop (talk ⋅ contribs) 17:33, 6 August 2016 (UTC)
 * I can't believe when it Ctrl + F to find The Hamilton Spectator it didn't show up. Hmm...well, I'm glad to have helped.  Crash Under  ride  21:31, 6 August 2016 (UTC)