Talk:Kojo Laing

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Lead is a bit effusive
The lead, as it stands now, is a bit effusive. Should be a neutral description of the subject, not how you'd introduce him at an awards ceremony. Also, the citation for the praise is from UKessays.com, which appears to be a site where you can buy college essays. I don't think this counts as a reliable source. 0x0077BE [talk/contrib] 22:11, 19 February 2014 (UTC)