Talk:Konstantin Kulikov/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 21:17, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

I will talk a look at this one in due course. Zawed (talk) 21:17, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

Lead
 * Suggest English translation in brackets for general-mayor?
 * Done

Early life...
 * In a month, he ...: seems unusual phrasing to me, suggest "The next month,..."
 * Done


 * English translation for "unter-ofitser"? (like there is for "ryadovoy")
 * Done


 * ...he returned to Petrograd: should mention this is the new name for St Petersburg
 * Done


 * It would make for a short first section, but I would break 'World War I and Russian Civil War' out from the 'Early life' section
 * Split paragraph instead

Interwar period
 * English translation for "kombrig"
 * Done


 * Kulikov received the rank of major general...: English-language rank used here rather than the Russian general-mayor
 * Done

World War II
 * ...forced to retreat to the Dnieper.: the phrase "forced to" is used earlier in this sentence, suggest changing this usage here
 * Done

Sources
 * Given history of nominator, happy to AGF on sourcing
 * No ISBN for the Bulkin ref? And is Penza the publisher or place of publication?
 * No ISBN


 * Sverdlov: English translation should be title case for consistency with other titles. Also, does it have an ISBN to go with the OCLC number?
 * No ISBN

Other stuff
 * One dupe link: Dnieper
 * Done

That's it for me. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 09:40, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
 * I'm uncertain that the image tag for [File:Куликов К.Е.jpg] is correct since the photograph would have been produced by the German authorities?
 * just checking you have seen this? Zawed (talk) 21:19, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
 * I only just saw the comments and will respond shortly. Kges1901 (talk) 22:31, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Happy with your changes, so am passing this as GA now. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 08:23, 5 November 2023 (UTC)