Talk:Konstantin Mereschkowski/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:31, 21 September 2021 (UTC)

Another! Many thanks again. Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:50, 21 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments


 * "his Russian work" is Russian needed here?
 * Cut.


 * No reason for those two references in the lead, they can go into the main body if they're not already there.
 * Moved.


 * " a Privy Councillor" is there a reason this is capitalised?
 * l/c.

publishing here, it's not clear.
 * "famous scientists, publishing on anthropology" who was doing the **
 * Edited.


 * "to the paedophilia for" do you mean criminal acts of paedophilia?
 * Edited.


 * "classification of the diatoms based " overlinked.
 * Fixed.


 * "University, Tatarstan;" I would think that Tatarstan should go after the first mention of Kazan, not here.
 * Done.


 * " St. Petersburg" Saint Petersburg for consistency.
 * Fixed.


 * "strikingly" according to whom?
 * Glossed.


 * "to form chloroplasts.[14][12]" overlinked and ref order.
 * Fixed.


 * "sizeable lichen herbarium, containing" lichen overlinked.
 * Fixed.


 * "remains at Kazan University. It " overlinked.
 * Fixed.


 * "a mutualistic symbiosis between" overlinked.
 * Fixed.


 * "and indeed ridiculed" even rather than indeed.
 * Fixed.


 * JSTOR is in both italics and not italics in the refs.
 * Fixed.


 * Schimper is mentioned in the infobox but not in the article at all.
 * Added mention.


 * Likewise Wallin.
 * Added.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:54, 27 September 2021 (UTC)