Talk:Kraljevo massacre/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 01:59, 2 February 2017 (UTC)

Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 01:59, 2 February 2017 (UTC)


 * Whenever you're ready, . 23 editor (talk) 16:48, 15 February 2017 (UTC)


 * Lead;
 * they were sprayed with heavy machine guns; "sprayed" is a bit awkward, use a better a word
 * Mention the dates of act i.e. 15–20 October 1941 in the lead
 * italicize Wehrmacht, wherever in the article
 * Section 1;
 * From that time then
 * Yugoslavia was almost completely surrounded
 * Yugoslavia was quickly overwhelmed
 * Section 2;
 * prefix the rank of Milan Nedić
 * Section 3; all good
 * Section 4; all good
 * 9.9% confidence, violation unlikely
 * Sorry, almost missed this one. Anyways, excellent work. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 02:12, 17 February 2017 (UTC)

All done, Krishna. Thanks for the review. 23 editor (talk) 19:22, 17 February 2017 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 01:46, 18 February 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 01:46, 18 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 01:46, 18 February 2017 (UTC)