Talk:Krasue

"Heredity" section
At time of writing the article has a section entitled "Heredity", which seems to me to perhaps want for a re-write for clarity.

I think that I understand what is being conveyed in said section, but, perhaps as a result of, I believe, not being terribly familiar with the topic, hesitate to perform the re-write myself.

For reference, here is the section as I believe it to have been as of my copying it shortly before beginning this article:

Many religious believe that Heredity to becoming the spirit originally come from The Pysical or Supernatural combination when someone try to learning the black art in Hindo Culture which appeared them to separate their head and body if they make the mistake or study the wrong magic. The Sins also is a relation to Krasue Heredity for the ones who aborted or killed someone in the pass life, will receive a punishment to become Krasue. Another story refer to a person which later become the Krasue, had Contaminating by eat or drink the meal with the old krasue's sailver or flesh. It mostly happened to the witch's relative especially their daughter or granddaughter. --41.185.161.19 (talk) 18:55, 26 January 2010 (UTC)