Talk:Kukuli Velarde

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 7 January 2019 and 27 April 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jocelyn Saravia. Peer reviewers: Katherinegrace0.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 23:45, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Jocelyn Saravia Peer Review
You had a very thorough introduction, biography, and career section. However, I believe you can combine the introduction and biography section together to make the article flow. I believe the career section is also important to your article. The section regarding Velarde's artwork was well written due to it being objective rather than subjective.

Regarding grammatical errors, make sure to focus on comma splices and spacing.