Talk:Kumari 21F/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 12:14, 19 January 2016 (UTC)

I'll have this done soon. JAG UAR   12:14, 19 January 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

 * "Siddhu realises the same and unites with Kumari after an incident; this is the film's centrepiece" - might sound better as The film's centrepiece revolves around Siddhu's realisation and his attempts to unite with Kumari after an incident
 * "Neither Prasad nor Rathnavelu charged remuneration for the film" - was charged remuneration for the film
 * "Siddhu is a chef leading a middle class life with his mother" - link middle class?
 * "The official soundtrack of Kumari 21F consisting of five songs was composed by Devi Sri Prasad" - The official soundtrack was composed by Devi Sri Prasad and consists of five songs
 * "and mute several objectionable lines of dialogues" - dialogue (no need for plural)
 * No dead links

This is an excellent article! I couldn't find many things wrong with it, so it explains the short review. Once all of the above are addressed I'll be happy to promote. JAG UAR   12:48, 19 January 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review ! I've addressed all the above comments and i hope the article is good to go. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 13:44, 19 January 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for addressing them so quickly! This is good to go now. Well done  JAG  UAR   14:48, 19 January 2016 (UTC)