Talk:Kurt Kaiser/Archive 1

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''' This is my first article - so there's probably errors in the article - feel free to fix what you find wrong and leave me a note, that way I can better myself! ''' Enjoy! KoshVorlon  ".. We are ALL Kosh..."  14:09, 28 January 2008 (UTC)

Feedback
Hi there. I visited this article because of your post at Requests for feedback. As you can see I took it upon myself to do a fair amount of fixing up myself; I added a lede that asserted the subject's notability, I fixed the syntax, removed the extraneous HTML code and line breaks left from your external editor, fixed the infobox, added categories etc. There are still a few issues that need addressing. The list of references should be changed into in-line citations|&mdash; the easiest way to do this is by the use of footnotes. I myself like to use the citation templates so that the citations are properly formed in a standardized way. According to it's summary page, the image being used in the article is copyrighted and being used under terms of free use; the Non-free content guideline discourages the use of non-free images of living people&mdash; the rationale is that an editor could go out with their own camera and get a free version. I'll be leaving a welcome template with some helpful editing links on your talk page, since I notice nobody every has yet. All in all I think this article is a nice one, good work! &mdash;Elipongo (Talk contribs) 19:37, 3 February 2008 (UTC)


 * Elipongo,

Ma shlomcha ! Thanks for responding to my request for feedback. Man, you did a lot of work in the article, thank you!. The only thing I was curious about was the removal of the double apostophe I placed on either side of my quotes (italics). I used them as a way of visually seperating a quote from the rest of the article. Is this not correct? Also, I will go through the article and footnote for easier referencing. Toda raba !! KoshVorlon  ".. We are ALL Kosh..."  21:31, 3 February 2008 (UTC)