Talk:Kurt Koffka

Draft
There's a draft that improves on the article at User:Ead1991/Sandbox template. See also User talk:Ead1991/Sandbox template. Huon (talk) 22:14, 26 November 2013 (UTC)

Anyone have any suggestions for my Kurt Koffka article located in my sandbox? Thanks so much! Ead1991 (talk) 23:06, 26 November 2013 (UTC)

Hello, If anyone has comments or suggestions for this article, please share them! Thanks so much! Ead1991 (talk) 19:15, 2 December 2013 (UTC)

Poor Lede facts
Don't want to start an edit war so I will just point out that this article hurts its credibility when mentions "he died in Northampton, Massachusetts from coronary thrombosis" in the lede. For the vast majority of those reading this article, the fact that is not crucial enough to be included in the lede will stick out like a sore thumb. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2610:148:1F02:7000:D986:9A8C:A84F:880C (talk) 01:24, 11 July 2022 (UTC)