Talk:Kwinana Freeway/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk · contribs) 22:30, 9 May 2013 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)

 I will place the article on hold for some fixes to be made.  Dough 48  72  00:03, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * "The interchange is a diamond interchange, with Kwinana Freeway free flowing, and includes additional bus only ramps connecting to the median lanes of the freeway.", I don't see the need for "with Kwinana Freeway free flowing".
 * Removed - Evad37 (talk) 02:03, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
 * The sentence "400 metres (1,300 ft)[8] south of Canning Highway is a partial Y interchange with Manning Road, consisting of a northbound entrance ramp and southbound exit ramp." should be reworded so it does not begin with a numeral.
 * Fixed - Evad37 (talk) 02:03, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
 * When mentioning Kwinana Freeway in prose, I would add "the" in front of it so it reads better.
 * Fixed - Evad37 (talk) 02:03, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
 * "the freeway realigns itself south-east" sounds awkward.
 * Changed - Evad37 (talk) 02:03, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * "Through the southern suburbs of Perth, Kwinana Freeway travels south as the boundary between suburbs", which suburbs does it travel as the boundary between?
 * There's about fourteen of them, which are mentioned throughout the subsection. I changed it to "...between various suburbs", and added mentions of some more suburbs - Evad37 (talk) 02:03, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I will now pass the article.  Dough 48  72  03:53, 10 May 2013 (UTC)