Talk:Kyle Snyder (wrestler)

Father (not Redskins owner)
Multiple editors have attempted to insert the information that Kyle Snyder is the son of Daniel Snyder, the owner of the Washington Redskins. He is not; this Kyle Snyder's father is Steve Snyder, former offensive lineman for Towson University but not an owner of any sports franchise. That information has appeared in a number of the articles used as citations here, but was not explicitly stated in this article. Consequently, editors repeatedly inserted erroneous information about a relationship to Daniel Snyder. I have added the information on Snyder's parents Steve and Tricia because it is biographical detail and well-sourced, but also to help preclude reintroduction of the false information.  Dwpaul  Talk   02:54, 5 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I have removed the family section for now since as it was written, it added nothing to the understanding of the subject. Maybe a rewrite would be better. --Malerooster (talk) 01:09, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

Does this article need a rewrite?
To me, this article seems too long and detailed, and it seems to hype Snyder (rather than take a neutral point of view). For example, the introduction alone is five paragraphs long. In it, we twice read about a fictional "Triple Crown;" we learn one his opponent's nicknames; we learn about one of his opponent's careers; we read about a particular injury in 2017; we learn how much an opponent outweighed him by in 2018; and one sentence tells us that we're reading about a "journey through the history books." Is all this detailed and promotional language useful? --783445jjdf (talk) 22:20, 11 August 2018 (UTC)