Talk:Kylfings/GA1

GA Review
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 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * There are a few things that need clarification. 1) The intro can be a bit confusing; it says they "lived in Scandinavia", but then it goes on to talk about "Byzantine records" and "Rus' law-codes", without any further explanation. This is explained further down, but should get a mention also here. 2) Varangians is wikilinked, but there should be a brief explanation of who they were in the text. 3) Their "Status in Eastern Europe" seems a bit out of place before it's even been discussed who they were.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Otherwise a good article, that I enjoyed reading and found very interesting. Good luck! Lampman (talk) 20:51, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the delay. Everything looks in order now, and the article has improved even further through expansions. Good work! Lampman (talk) 20:49, 25 January 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Otherwise a good article, that I enjoyed reading and found very interesting. Good luck! Lampman (talk) 20:51, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the delay. Everything looks in order now, and the article has improved even further through expansions. Good work! Lampman (talk) 20:49, 25 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the delay. Everything looks in order now, and the article has improved even further through expansions. Good work! Lampman (talk) 20:49, 25 January 2009 (UTC)