Talk:Kyra (Charmed)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:04, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:04, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 02:23, 22 June 2016 (UTC)


 * General
 * No copyvio detected
 * No dablinks detected
 * External links are fine


 * Development
 * Expand WB
 * Done Aoba47 (talk) 04:17, 22 June 2016 (UTC)


 * every women on Charmed "woman"
 * Done. That was a very silly mistake lol Aoba47 (talk) 04:17, 22 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Wikilink Charmed: Season 10 at first mention, it is linked later
 * Done Aoba47 (talk) 04:17, 22 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Appearances
 * A few words about "the Elders" and "the Avatars"? That would save readers a click
 * Done, but let me know if more needs to be added.


 * The "#" may be confusing
 * Clarified and done. Aoba47 (talk) 04:17, 22 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Reception
 * I would say Kyra when I begin the section
 * Done Aoba47 (talk) 04:17, 22 June 2016 (UTC)


 * What exactly is Hypable?
 * Done Aoba47 (talk) 04:17, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for picking up all three of my articles for review. I have addressed your above comments; please let me know if there is anything else I can improve. Aoba47 (talk) 04:22, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your hard work! Promoted. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 04:30, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your reviews! You helped me a lot to improve the article and catch all of my silly mistakes. Aoba47 (talk) 04:34, 22 June 2016 (UTC)