Talk:LED Lights (Health)

Peer Review
I am sorry in advance if this peer review is hard to understand. I am trying to understand how to use wiki still lol. If you have any questions or it is easier for us to edit this through email don't hesitate to email me. (jsori015@ucr.edu)

LED Lamp notes: ·Topic is very well identified. ·household lowercase, ·"(LED-FM0" add the closing parenthesis, ·I wanna say for citing on wiki you do not need to put the author's name in parenthesis. You just need to insert the citation with adding the number. The number indicates what source you used for the information.

Fluorescent Light Bulb notes: ·very good paragraph and very well explained info. Just make sure to cite your research/information. It looks like you have a lot of sources but make sure in this section or paragraph that you add the citation within the text so the reader knows where you got the information from and they can go find the source(s) in the references part.

Overall: I think mainly it is just citing that needs to be added so we know that the information you have is reliable and we know which exact source you found the information from. Just a reminder according to the wiki training; just make sure your content is neutral. Like don't only talk about the positives of lights. Maybe add some negative effects in there too. Structure is very good; topics are organized. Very interesting information; I did not know that LED and Fluorescent lights could be beneficial to health. Very good work! Jsori015 (talk) 23:12, 24 May 2019 (UTC)