Talk:LGBT history in Pakistan

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Lead section
This page's lead does not seem to follow the MOS:LEAD to provide a proper summary of the topic's key contents. Instead of being an intro for readers, it is conclusive and does not seem neutral enough. I also don't think the quote from Mother Jones is proper in the lead. I suggest taking out the quote and revising the rest, maybe by briefly summarizing the history as elaborated in later sections. Will happily discuss with fellow editors. 23impartial (talk) 02:22, 28 June 2024 (UTC)


 * If there are no objections, I will move the quote down and add a summary to the lead. 23impartial (talk) 13:13, 29 June 2024 (UTC)