Talk:LLA Azteca Championship/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:19, 24 February 2019 (UTC)

Going to review this entry. MWright96 (talk) 15:19, 24 February 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox

 * Use the plainlist template in the promotion field of the infobox so that CMLL and LLA appear in a unbulleted list

Lead

 * "It was sponsored by TV Azteca Noreste, that televised all championship matches" - who
 * "as it changed hands each time LLA/ CMLL promoted a title match." - LLA and CMLL
 * "who was born in 1991 and won the title in September 2012 making him 19 or 20 years old at the time." - If Mistico was born in 1991, he would have been 20 or 21 when he won the title, correct?

Background

 * "that are used in the storylines presented on their shows, they are not won as result" - the comma should be replaced by a semi-colom
 * "but the outcome of the matches are pre-determined by their promoters." - better: but their outcome are pre-determined by promoters.
 * "The championship is represented by a belt for the champion to wear" - incumbent holder
 * "and by 2009 it was decided to create the "Azteca Championship" - and by 2009, had deided to create the "Azteca Championship",
 * The entire second background is lacking reliable source(s)

History

 * "The Azteca Championship was created in late 2009 with a one-night tournament" - as
 * "with two six-man tag team matches to reduce the field from 12 to 6." - 12 to 6 wrestlers
 * "The semi-final match was a torneo cibernetico elimination match" - event
 * "with three wrestlers in the ring at the same time." - concurrently.
 * "who was born in 1991 and won the title in September 2012 making him 19 or 20 years old at the time." - same issue as the third query in the lede
 * "The last champions was Místico," - champion

Title history

 * Monterrey, Nuevo León should be wikilinked the first time it is mentioned, not the sixth

Champion age at title win, youngest to oldest

 * "Místico: 19–20 years" - same query as the third one in the lede and the fifth one in the history section