Talk:LW5/7/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 17:07, 19 January 2013 (UTC)

I've made a few edits to the article directly, slight little slip ups here and there, relating to our manual of style. I love the word locomotor, thought I'd throw that in there. The word seems so familiar, yet it obviously isn't.

Basically, the final paragraph was a little awkward, there were a few places where it might be misinterpreted, and so I've attempted to reword it. Feel free to edit further.

Anyway, a fairly easy (albeit delayed) pass. -- Zanimum (talk) 17:07, 19 January 2013 (UTC)