Talk:La Dama Enmascarada/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 09:51, 25 April 2020 (UTC)

Am reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 09:51, 25 April 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "Caballero was a relative of professional wrestler Irma González as well as González's daughter Irma Aguilar although it is unclear exactly how they were related." - seems odd. In the infobox, it states that she is niece to Irma González. Please clarify this
 * "She started out as a masked wrestler," - began her career
 * "but lost her mask in 1958 to Irma González, but would later wrestle under the mask again." - repetition of the word "but"

Biography

 * "Caballero was born into a circus family" - she
 * Wikilink boxing promoters to Promoter (entertainment)

Professional wrestling career

 * "including Magdalena Caballero. Caballero would work" Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this.
 * "Her reign lasted less than a year as Irma González won the championship later that year." - in 1955.
 * "she would at times wrestle under her real name and at other times still use the "La Dama Enmascarada" name," - and sometimes the
 * "After the mask loss" - the loss of her mask,
 * "despite not being masked anymore." - no longer being masked.
 * "Due to very few records of wrestling from that period of time" - from that time period
 * "it's uncertain who defeated La Dama" - it is uncertain as to who
 * "On January 22, 1961, La Dama Enmascarada evened the score with Irma González" - the text in bold is not particularly encyclopedic
 * "as she teamed up with Chabela Romero to take on the team of Irma González and Toña la Tapatía" - repetition of "team"
 * "Empresa Mexicana de Lucha Libre (EMLL) show in Guadalajara." - the acroynms are not needed since they are not repeated elsewhere

Personal life

 * "Caballero and husband Andrés Ramos had a total of six children together before their divorce in the 1950s" - the text in bold is not needed
 * "Magdalena Caballero died on March 11, 2006," - what did she die from? Do we know?