Talk:La Metálica/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:56, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

Will review this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 18:56, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * Delink Mexican per MOS:OVERLINK
 * "She is the current, reigning Mexican National Women's Champion," - incumbent
 * "having won the championship in December 2018." - how about changing the text in bold title to avoid close repetition

Professional wrestling career

 * "She made her in-ring debut on May 13, 2009, after having trained under Rocky Santana, Sadico, Judas el Traidor, Terrorista, Negro Navarro, Justiciero and Robin Maravilla prior to her debut." - try to reword the text in bold for the avoidance of repetition
 * "At some point prior to July 2014," - At an unknown date

CMLL (2016–current)

 * "when not needed for CMLL shows." - when she was not needed
 * "all risk their masks in a Lucha de Apuestas, bet match." - don't think that the comma is needed here
 * "The 14-woman torneo cibernetico match where La Metálica was the second competitor eliminated." - saw La Metálica become the second wrestler eliminated.
 * "to become a double champion," - two-time
 * "She lost to Dalys in the finals two weeks later." - you mean Daly?
 * "Daly originally earned a CMLL World Women's Championship match against Marcela, but Marcela was injured." - try not to use Marcela's name too closely in the same sentence