Talk:Lactarius alnicola/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ucucha 18:25, 14 July 2010 (UTC)


 * Can you make the etymology a little more explicit? (I.e., say that Alnus = alder and cola = inhabitant).
 * Done. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)


 * "Cap martin (edge of the cap)"—is the gloss necessary?
 * Probably not, but I was asked to gloss it once before, and have been glossing ever since. I'll try unglossing for this one and see what happens. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)


 * "with matted fibrils beneath the gluten near the margin"—please explain
 * Done. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)


 * "central and Californian population"—don't you mean "central Californian"?
 * central and southern, fixed. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)


 * "slowly stains pale yellow"—when? Does it become yellow in maturity or when you do something to the fungus?
 * CLarified. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)


 * "nominate subspecies"—wouldn't that be the nominate variety?
 * Yup. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)


 * So how can we distinguish it from Catharellus cibarius?
 * Added. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)


 * Baja California is not in the United States (I corrected this).
 * My last geography class was in grade 8. It's obvious sometimes. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)


 * Should the lead mention that it may also form associations with non-conifers, like oaks and alders?
 * Done. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)


 * India is a big place, so I think you should mention the state. Are there no data on ecological associations there?
 * Added state, no other data at this time. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

Is this useful: Title: Russulaceous ectomycorrhizae of Abies lasiocarpa and Picea engelmannii Author(s): Kernaghan, G; Currah, RS; Bayer, RJ Source: CANADIAN JOURNAL OF BOTANY-REVUE CANADIENNE DE BOTANIQUE  Volume: 75   Issue: 11   Pages: 1843-1850   Published: NOV 1997

Title: Additional new records on Lactarius from Mexico Author(s): Montoya, L; Bandala, VM Source: MYCOTAXON  Volume: 57   Pages: 425-450   Published: JAN-MAR 1996
 * Both useful and added. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

Ucucha 18:25, 14 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the excellent comments and quick review! Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks; I'm now passing the article. Ucucha 06:12, 15 July 2010 (UTC)