Talk:Lady Red Couture/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 01:16, 28 March 2021 (UTC)

Copy revisions

 * However, the following day, July 25, Baines died — listing the date here sounds redundant given the flow of the sentence, and it would remain in the infobox anyway
 * ...also sharing tributes to her life and work. — change to "and shared" to improve the flow of the sentence
 * ✅. I changed it to "and they shared", as this allows the comma preceding the conjunction to be preserved. I think clarity issues could arise from expressed shock and sadness at her death and shared tributes ....
 * ✅. I changed it to "and they shared", as this allows the comma preceding the conjunction to be preserved. I think clarity issues could arise from expressed shock and sadness at her death and shared tributes ....

Other

 * Consider changing the quote box to right alignment
 * I chose the left alignment to prevent the infobox from crashing into the quote box and pushing it further down.

Summary
Good on you for archiving the references and having GOCE come through for a copy edit—those two things have left the article far closer than they would be otherwise. It's a bit unfortunate for a drag performer that somehow no free use images exist from her career, but such is life, and the image is appropriately tagged. If a CC-licensed or similar image emerges, that would be preferable, but right now this is fine.

I did add a couple of commas for consistent use of serial commas on the page.

The quote box issue might be a "your mileage may vary" thing, but it's worth looking into. I personally wouldn't have gone with the background color, but it's fine.

Putting on hold — ping me when the issues are resolved, and it shouldn't take long. Appreciate being able to review an article on a trans woman. :) Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 02:43, 28 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I removed the background color; I don't feel too strongly about it. Thank you for this nice review! :-) Armadillo  pteryx  03:21, 28 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks. Everything looks good. Passing now. Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 05:48, 28 March 2021 (UTC)