Talk:Ladysmith Black Mambazo/GA1

GA Reassessment
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This review has been initiated as part of the sweeps project. The article is neutral in tone and well-written. It's main problems are: The one image is in order (I checked the original Flickr licensing). hamiltonstone (talk) 22:43, 5 January 2010 (UTC)
 * insufficient in-line citations, particularly in the sections beginning with subsection "2008-present". All this material needs much better referencing. Every award received needs a source, or a source needs to be provided at the head of the table if they are all able to be found in one source.
 * the order of sections seems strange. I would have expected "membership" to be the first, or one of the first, sections, while the LBM Foundation section should be one of the last.
 * it is not clear why the material on touring is separate to the chronological history of the group. Some of it repeats points already made in the history, highlighting the problem. I suggest removing the main "history" heading, make the time periods main-level headings, integrate all touring info into that framework, and delete the "touring" section altogether. This will improve flow and eliminate repetition.