Talk:Laguna Miscanti/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 05:00, 26 October 2021 (UTC)

I'll look at this tomorrow when I am more awake! —  Ghost River  05:00, 26 October 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lede

 * No comma after "of the Antofagasta Region"
 * Removed. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
 * "Miñiques volcano" "The Miñiques volcano"
 * I don't think that a "the" is strictly necessary. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
 * To be pedantic, the "Antofagasta Region" is not mentioned in the body and is not cited
 * Now it is with citation. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Diacritic needed in "Laguna Miñiques"
 * Done? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

Geography

 * Laguna Miñiques should be linked upon its first mention (5,000 tourists) and delinked in the following clause
 * It already is in the lead? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

Hydrography and geology

 * "It is a maximally" "Laguna Miscanti is a maximally"
 * Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Diacritic needed for Cerro Miñiques
 * Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Delink Laguna Miñiques in this section

Hydrology

 * "ranging from the Miocene to Holocene age"
 * Not sure that this is correct - Miocene is often a modifier to "age" rather than a proper noun. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:22, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Climate

 * "a little warmer" – can we be more precise?
 * No, sorry. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:22, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Delink Holocene, linked above
 * Hyphen to em dash in "late Pleistocene-early Holocene wet period"
 * Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

Biology

 * Comma after "Widgeonweed grows at the lakeshores"

General comments

 * Image and map are properly licesned and relevant
 * No stability concerns in the revision history
 * Earwig score looks good
 * Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 19:22, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
 * I have left additional comments on the sections I did not get to earlier. —  Ghost River  01:33, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
 * I think all is done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
 * I have made a few additional changes myself; things linked in the lede still need to be linked upon their first mention in the body. In any case, I am passing this article. —  Ghost River  16:40, 1 November 2021 (UTC)