Talk:Lake Jivaro

Neglected
Many shortcomings. I summarized
 * Fixed too many vaguenesses and at best clumsy wordings to deserve a comfortable rating. If its rating is encouraging neglect of further improvement, then the rating needs to be downgraded.”
 * Well, Even w/ my touchups, it is disappointing, and deservedly labeled a mere stub. Were it not so pedestrian, I’d hHave callEd it a presumable ad, and I doubt further improvement would be justifiable. Reminds me uncomfortably of “Lud Kissel and the 47 Crappies”, pretty sure by Gene Shepard, who dissed the species as a whole. Ah: in ‘’In God We Trust; All Others Pay Cash’’, methinks. Wonderful writing, about an industrial suburb that should have been named “46 Shades of Gray”, methinks. —JerzyA (talk) 12:52, 31 May 2020 (UTC)