Talk:Lance Skiiiwalker

Critiquing The Page
Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I’m about to positively critique this page for my class so please for all of those who added sections, please don’t tae any of what I’m about to say too personal.

I think this page is pretty good with the information that was acquired of Lance Skiiiwalker. He is very new to the public so of course there’s not a whole lot of information on him yet. The background that is said of him was all I could find as well so I understand the struggle of getting information on him. If anything the only real problem I see is that there i no 2017 addition to Skiiiwalker’s Musical career. He just released a single this year entitled, Where To With You, and had a music video he produced accompanied it. The video and song is now taken down from Skiiiwalker’s official youtube channel so I understand if there was confusion. Still though it was posted at one point officially by Skiiiwalker himself. Another problem I had about this page is the lack of picture of Skiiiwalker on the page. By this time it should be fairly easy to find a picture since he has been on tour and posted his own pictures. The picture of person makes up a big part of the page. It lets people know exactly who they’re reading and learning about. Even with those few criticisms I do admire the people who actually sat down and created a page on Lance Skiiiwalker. He may be new but his work has already shown with the many artist he helped create amazing music that pushed genre’s forward. Thank you to those who read this through. Ahtimb (talk • contribs) 22:22, 10 October 2017 (UTC) Ahtimb (talk) 19:57, 11 October 2017 (UTC)