Talk:Landau–Peierls instability

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: I think it would be better to have a gentler lede for novices.

Ldm1954 (talk) 00:30, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

Query
Hi, in "This means that the an element at a particular point is displaced through very large distances" I think the is superfluous. But I don't claim to understand this sufficiently to change this.  Ϣere Spiel  Chequers  18:10, 18 July 2024 (UTC)