Talk:Landing Light (book)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 4 June 2019 and 31 July 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): User:C.lasia.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 23:53, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Note
I made a few copyedits for you, but you need to go through this whole article very carefully, paying attention to little things. You do not as yet have a lot of content, and now that I look over your article I see part of the reason why: you do not have a lot of sourcing. It seems to me you did not look at JSTOR to look for references--or at the page full of references that I dropped eight days ago. Dr Aaij (talk) 01:54, 28 June 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review
Reviewed by: Watsherm (talk) 16:06, 1 July 2019 (UTC)

Lead: The lead is short and sweet and cuts straight to the point. Giving the readers basic knowledge of how this poem is important and positively reflects the rest of the given information.

Structure: The article has a table of contents which always makes it easier for readers to do some speedy navigation throughout an article. In your "Contents" tab I think you should remove the lower portions of that paragraph and section it off as "Themes" and then go into more depth. If you can, try to find the names of the individual 38 lyric poems and list them out. That will be great for your "Contents"

Balance: The writer's background can use at least two more sentences because you wanna reflect the writer's life and how he came to the idea of writing the poem.

Neutral Content: No biased opinions, or first person writing throughout the article.

Sourcing: Reliable and gives excellent context over all the information provided.

Conclusion: As you keep updating this article make sure that you try and keep it as well-rounded as you can. Use reliable sources that you can depend on and try and go above and beyond. From what I read this poetry collection seems delightful. Try to find more critiques about the Landing Light that you can include in your article.