Talk:Language exposure for deaf children

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Greenough.h. Peer reviewers: Jamesonoreilly, Rothschild.e.

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 January 2021 and 8 May 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Aylee12345, Nell Curtin, Athorn17. Peer reviewers: Hayleydt, Cmcgilpin, Ambenicole.

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Article Peer Review
Overall your contribution is great. It is unbiased and gives the reader the perfect amount of detail. I think your content is well developed and organized throughout, it considers multiple angles on the topic. Some of the sentence structures and or the wording is a little weird. In the first section about language exposure, the sentence starting with “there is a lot of research” sounds a little bit awkward. I would change the wording to be more quantifying and clear because you are linking it to the first sentence. Other than simple grammatical error I think your contribution is great. As a reader, I enjoyed the layout and the explanation of the research, this is something I will try and improve upon on my wiki page. Great Job! Rothschild.e (talk) 16:14, 4 August 2017 (UTC)