Talk:Lansing Mall/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 00:10, 2 October 2018 (UTC)

Opening statement
For replying to Reviewer comment, please use ✅,, , ❌, , or , followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  00:10, 2 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Replied to all your suggestions. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 01:21, 2 October 2018 (UTC)

History

 * The article never describes what exactly Wurzburg's is.
 * ✅ Clarified that it was a department store.
 * The Lansing Mall was built just outside the city of Lansing, Michigan, the state's capital, within Delta Township along M-43 (Saginaw Highway). Built by Forbes-Cohen, it officially opened to the public on July 31, 1969. Reduce this to one sentence; it's kind of redundant as it is.
 * ✅ Copy edited.
 * Reduce "1990s and 2000s" to a === header, and change the name to something like "1990s to present."
 * ✅ Changed header.
 * Panera Bread[22] MOS:REFPUNCT
 * ✅ I knew that you'd point this out, so I fixed it before you noted it.

Photo gallery
Dissolve and disperse all two pictures in the gallery in the article prose.
 * ✅ Pictures moved.