Talk:Larrabee County, Iowa/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 22:04, 13 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: CosXZ (talk · contribs) 23:40, 20 May 2024 (UTC)

Stable
Cos (X + Z) 23:40, 20 May 2024 (UTC)

Image and source review

 * File:Map of Iowa highlighting Kossuth County.svg: appropriate image
 * File:Map of Iowa highlighting Bancroft County.svg: appropriate image
 * File:Portrait of William Larrabee.jpg: related with the article
 * Great copyright on all images
 * Citations are styled good
 * All citations are reliable

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❌ WP:CITEOVERKILL
 * Bancroft County's land was merged with Kossuth County, making Kossuth the largest county in Iowa, and made Iowa a state of 99 counties.[2][3] [1] mentions this too so, you can triple-confirm this statement.
 * being deemed "illegal and unconstitutional."[5] [5] doesn't mention this, [4] mentions "unconstitutional" so, remove "illegal and" and add after After Crocker County was disestablished in 1871, Crocker County's land was merged into Kossuth County.

✅ ❌ WP:CITEOVERKILL ✅ ✅ ❌ once is good enough ❌ once is good enough
 * The Iowa Supreme Court ruled in the case L.K. Garfield vs R.I. Brayton that Crocker County was a violation of the Iowa constitution, put [1] after comma.
 * The name "Larrabee" would honor governor William Larrabee.[6] [1] mentions this too.
 * The proposal would divide Kossuth County, making the northern part Larrabee County.[1] [7] mentions this too.
 * The proposal received 920 votes compared to the opposition's 3599 votes; therefore, Larrabee County was not established which meant Iowa remained a state of 99 counties,[1] [4] mentions this too.
 * and Kossuth County remained the largest county in Iowa.[4] [3] mentions this too.

Copyvio
Earwig shows a 2.9% which is amazing.Cos (X + Z) 23:40, 20 May 2024 (UTC)


 * @CosXZ any other things I need to address? 48JCL (talk) 01:57, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
 * I will review more of the criteria later today Cos  (X + Z) 14:56, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
 * @48JCL I got some things I need you to do Cos  (X + Z) 22:56, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
 * @CosXZ issues addressed, could you pass? 48JCL (talk) 02:11, 25 May 2024 (UTC)

Mos
✅ 48JCL (talk) 23:20, 21 May 2024 (UTC)

Layout
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 * Move coordinates to in between the citations and the categories.

Lead
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 * Larrabee County was a proposed county in the northern part of Kossuth County, Iowa in February 1913.
 * It was named after governor William Larrabee. replace "It" with "The County".
 * It was preceded by Crocker County until it was disestablished being illegal. replace "It" with "The County" and "it" with "the County".
 * A vote was held in Kossuth County in order to see if the county would be established or not. It failed and Kossuth County remained the largest county in Iowa. capitalize "county" and replace "It" with "The Vote".

@CosXZ done 48JCL (talk) 16:32, 22 May 2024 (UTC)

Words to watch
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 * However, the residents of northern Kossuth County sent a delegation to Des Moines to express that they did not want Larrabee County to exist.

Background
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 * , making Iowa officially a state of 100 counties.
 * , Bancroft County was eliminated because it was not suitable for settling due to its marshes and wetlands replace "eliminated" with "disestablished" and "it" with "the county".
 * Bancroft County's land was merged with Kossuth County, making Kossuth the largest County in Iowa, decapitalize "County" in "the largest County".
 * , and therefore Iowa was now a state of 99 counties. ---> and made Iowa a state of 99 counties.
 * It lasted from 1870 to 1871, replace "It" with "The county".
 * , being deemed illegal and unconstitutional. ---> being deemed "illegal and unconstitutional."
 * , which declares in Article 11 that no new county shall be created which contains less than 432 square miles. --->, which declares in Article 11 that "no new county shall be created which contains less than 432 square miles."

Proposal
✅ ✅ ✅ ✅ 48JCL (talk) 19:15, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
 * On 22 February 1913, the US doesn't use the day-month-year format.
 * On February 22 1913, add a coma after 22.
 * The name Larrabee would honor new governor William Larrabee. ---> The name "Larrabee" would honor governor William Larrabee.
 * The proposal received just 920 votes compared to the opposition's 3599 votes;


 * @CosXZ 48JCL (talk) 19:15, 23 May 2024 (UTC)