Talk:Lassie (1954 TV series)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Xtzou ( Talk ) 16:17, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

Hi, I am reviewing this article and am impressed with how well written it is. And very interesting. My comments are the following:
 * Why isn't there anything on the actual dogs that played the role of Lassie. How many, where they came from, who trained them etc.
 * There are five fair use images. That is too many for an article. One, or perhaps even two can be justified, but no more than that.

Xtzou ( Talk ) 16:17, 18 April 2010 (UTC)


 * Reduced the number of images and swapped one out to one that showed Pal and Tommy. Miyagawa   (talk)  19:47, 18 April 2010 (UTC)


 * The dog information is mostly included in the Lassie article, although in this article it's mostly in the three paragraphs of the casting section. Although I did realize that it was missing from the Characters and Cast section, so I added an additional listing there for dog actors as Lassie. Miyagawa   (talk)  19:47, 18 April 2010 (UTC)

Xtzou ( Talk ) 12:43, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Very good. It is a wonderful article. Just two very minor comments:
 * Writers - nothing more to say about who they were other than McCarthyism?
 * "Lassie portrait friendship ring based on the one Uncle Petrie fashions for Timmy" - on one of the Uncle Petrie fashions for Timmy?


 * I fixed the above to my suggestion " on one of the". Hope that's right. This is a wonderful and informative article. Xtzou ( Talk ) 14:24, 19 April 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused: }
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Good work! Xtzou ( Talk ) 14:24, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Good work! Xtzou ( Talk ) 14:24, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Good work! Xtzou ( Talk ) 14:24, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Good work! Xtzou ( Talk ) 14:24, 19 April 2010 (UTC)