Talk:Last Ranker/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 11:57, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

I'll do this shortly. ♦ jaguar  11:57, 28 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * "and combat featuring players controlling Zig in real-time during turn-based battles." - perhaps link Turn-based tactics here
 * "Debuting in the top ten best-selling titles of the week" - the lead neglected to mention that this game was only released in Japan until after this point. I would move the last sentence (The game remains exclusive to Japan, a fact attributed to the platform's weak market presence overseas.) to the beginning of this paragraph


 * Body
 * "charging energy meter filled with a resource called SP" - does SP stand for anything?
 * "Niinou created the game's design pitch around that" - around what? The aforementioned game was Street Fighter II, was that Niinou's inspiration or was it Capcom's fighting game repertoire?
 * "A 2CD original soundtrack album" - I assume this means the album was released with two CDs? How about two-CD or twin CD?
 * "The first hint was given in 2008" - first hint of release
 * Inconsistency of US spelling "localization" in Release subsection, and "organise" in Synopsis
 * Minor nitpick; the references use YMD date format while the prose dates are in MDY. Wouldn't it be best to standardise this Japanese-centric article to DMY format? I've been away from Wikipedia for too long to know what's what...

It's been a while. That's all I could find. This is a solid article well deserving of GA status. Once all of the above are out of the way I'll be happy to promote this. ♦ jaguar  12:26, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Did everything, including the dating thing. And no, it never says what SP is. --ProtoDrake (talk) 14:10, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks ProtoDrake. Let's promote this now. ♦  jaguar  14:42, 28 September 2021 (UTC)