Talk:Later Bitches/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:46, 4 August 2022 (UTC)

I will review this today! --K. Peake 07:46, 4 August 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Shouldn't Ultra be added to the infobox?
 * Only the label for the original release should be listed, which is Panik here.


 * "to distribute "Later Bitches" internationally." → "to distribute the song internationally."
 * Remove among others from the end of the reception sentence since that adds nothing of substance
 * The breakthrough hit part is not really sourced
 * Removed


 * "number ten in Romania." → "number 10 in Romania." per MOS:NUM
 * "It also notably charted at" → "It further charted at"
 * "an official music video was uploaded" → "a music video was uploaded" with the wikilink
 * "where the track received a" → "where it received a"

Background

 * Retitle to Background and composition, moving the comp here
 * To avoid having very very very small sections, I created "Background and composition". On many instances, the "Background" section also encompasses info on the song's release process, so I think this should be fine. Also I prefer this to "Release and reception", since IMO, those don't have anything in common. I hope this is alright.


 * [5] should be solely at the end of the sentence
 * "he addressed this matter" → "he addressed this discussion"
 * "pointing out that at the time of the article's release in September 2018, there" → "pointing out in September 2018 there"
 * Make comp the last para of this section

Release and composition

 * The release para can be moved to reception as I will further instruct, to avoid overly short size
 * Img looks good!
 * You have written various countries, yet only the UK and the US; maybe add a ref with numerous citations at the end?
 * I just added 3 more refs, hope that is fine.


 * Only the German release is sourced in the third sentence
 * "while Ultra Music and" → "while Ultra and"
 * "on 9 November 2018." → "on 9 November."
 * "was premiered on" → "was made available on"
 * Pipe spoken to Spoken word

Reception

 * Retitle to Release and reception, making release the first para
 * The "and immediately lures you onto the dance floor" quote is not sourced
 * It is, check the source again


 * Pipe El Profesor to Professor (Money Heist)
 * "For Radio Eska, the song" → "For the staff of Radio Eska, the song"
 * The "contender for hit of the year" quote is not sourced
 * It is, check the source again


 * Wikilink as Ultratop
 * "climbing to number ten in" → "climbing to number 10 in" per MOS:NUM
 * Remove pipe on France since Syndicat National de l'Édition Phonographique is later linked again
 * Remove among others from the end of the sentence

Promotion and other usage

 * Img looks good!
 * Wikilink lyric video per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * Pipe lo-fi to Lo-fi music
 * Are you sure that belonging to is an appropriate description?
 * Yes, they probably paid him to use his footage. The footage is under his copyright.


 * Wikilink music video
 * "was eventually released by" → "was later released by"
 * "in front of a 5,000-people audience," → "in front of an audience of 5,000,"
 * "The ceremony further used" → "The ceremony also used"
 * Why is NRJ not linked on the first mention instead?

Track listing

 * Good

Weekly charts

 * Should German Airplay really be included when the main one is already there?
 * It's a split ranking, focusing on airplay only (I don't even think those are counted into the official ranking). The source is trustworthy and the chart has gained a reputation, I think this should be included.

Monthly charts

 * Good

Year-end charts

 * Split these tables into different ones, so when someone wants to sort the different years it doesn't do both at once

Certifications

 * Good

Release history

 * Maybe change 25 May 2018 release to various and merge those citations into one ref?
 * I usually do this when a song is released on the same date in many, many, maybe almost all countries. In this case, it is only 6 countries, and I think the reader should be aware of this.

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; hopefully you have a good response time for this one! --K. Peake 09:49, 4 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Will need one more week since I'm on vacation. Many thanks; Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:34, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
 * I will allow for that completely, being on holiday myself at the moment so not as active as usual! --K. Peake 15:19, 12 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank for for your review, I fixed the majority of your comments. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:25, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, I am happy with your response even though it may be late and I did some brief copy editing myself! --K. Peake 20:22, 14 August 2022 (UTC)