Talk:Laura Kobayashi

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Article: Punch Brothers, 2018: All Ashore The album was also the first self produced album the band has done. Ablemae2000 (talk) 21:06, 9 October 2018 (UTC)

Use a reference on your second sentence of chamber music. JShadeee (talk) 13:22, 24 October 2018 (UTC) Be careful using references after each sentence a lot. For example, I just went to Michael Jackson's Wikipedia page and even though it has many references. Whenever multiple sentences used the same source the reference was just put at the end of the last sentence relating to the reference. JShadeee (talk) 15:46, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

Maybe you could include some of the sub-sections in the lead as it is so short, such as education potentially.--Mcintyci (talk) 15:23, 26 October 2018 (UTC)

I have fixed my citation errors and made sure there was no more information I could have included in my lead section.Ablemae2000 (talk) 13:57, 29 October 2018 (UTC)

Got rid of a accidental double space between "including" and "group" in the chamber group sub heading. JShadeee (talk) 16:05, 29 October 2018 (UTC)