Talk:Laura Lee Clark

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I am new to Wikipedia and this is my first page I am submitting. It says that my page sounds too much like an advertisement. Does anyone have any suggestions on how to change it? Or could possibly point out what parts sound like an advertisement? Just need a little insight. I greatly appreciate any advice. Thank you.

Never Stop Learning (talk) 20:16, 11 September 2012 (UTC)