Talk:Laura Robson/GA1

GA Review
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Hello. I will be doing the GA review for this article. Here are some suggestions for improvement: The article will remain on hold for seven days to allow for these changes. Nikki ♥  311  17:42, 7 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Per MOS:DASH, endashes should be used for ranges of numbers, wins/loses, and scores. So... 6-2 should be 6–2.
 * There seems to be an extra comma of something here: an oil executive with Royal Dutch Shell,[4], and
 * Who said, "as soon as she could hold a tennis racquet"? It might be nice to say something like, According to Laura, she began playing "as soon as she could hold a tennis racquet" or According to her parents, Laura began playing "as soon as she could hold a tennis racquet.
 * Robson was then given a wildcard into the main draw of the $75,000 ITF in Shrewsbury, Great Britain. - source?
 * Returning to the ITF circuit, Robson entered as the fifth seed in the $10,000 event held in Sunderland, England. - source?
 * The headers for Career statistics are a bit much. Is there another way that it can be written so that many subheaders aren't used?
 * The references need to be better formatted. A few are missing accessdates. I also clicked on a couple of other ones that had authors and dates that need to be added in the reference.
 * Thanks for your review. I think I've covered everything (those refs are nasty). Noble Story (talk • contributions) 10:00, 8 March 2009 (UTC)

Ok. One last thing, then before I look back over the article: Nikki ♥  311  23:55, 8 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Robson is currently second on... - this is a time dated statement. Something along the lines of As of (date), Robson is second on...
 * OK, I've got it. Thanks again. Noble Story (talk • contributions) 00:47, 9 March 2009 (UTC)

Great. I've passed the article. Good job! :) Nikki  ♥  311  20:48, 9 March 2009 (UTC)