Talk:Lauren Ebsary/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: ɳorɑfʈ  Talk! 05:31, 24 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Review begin. Will be in touch shortly. ɳorɑfʈ  Talk! 05:31, 24 April 2010 (UTC)
 * To be honest, I can't find anything that needs improvement. This leads me to believe that I should seek a second opinion. If I pass it without changes right before the elimination drive ends, I'm sure someone will cry foul. ɳorɑfʈ  Talk! 17:03, 26 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me. I made a couple of minor copy-edits. Prose is "reasonably well written", there is always room for improvement, but it is clear and grammatical, MOS OK, images OK, referencing OK, broad - she is still an active player so it can be expanded as time goes on, NPOV. Recommend a pass. –– Jezhotwells (talk) 23:42, 27 April 2010 (UTC)