Talk:Laurence Bagley

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This biography of a living person needs additional citations for verification. Tagged since January 2012. This is a biography of a dead person, does this still apply?
 * No, I didn't see the section on his death at the bottom, Tag will be removed. Pol430  talk to me 11:15, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

It may have been edited by a contributor who has a close connection with its subject. Tagged since January 2012. Yes, Laurence Bagley was my father.
 * Please bear in mind the requirement to write from a neutral point of view, currently the article does not meet this standard. Pol430  talk to me 11:15, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

It should be divided into sections by topic, to make it more accessible. Please help by adding section headings in accordance with Wikipedia's Manual of Style. Tagged since January 2012. OK
 * Although there are too many sections for the volume of text. I would recommend having one level 2 heading of "Art" and discussing the various types in separate paragraphs. Pol430  talk to me 11:15, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

It may need to be wikified to meet Wikipedia's quality standards. Tagged since January 2012 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Son of Laurence (talk • contribs) 07:57, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Although more Wikilinks are needed, where appropriate. Pol430  talk to me 11:15, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

Added
I have added a basic infobox from the info' provided in the article. (MrNiceGuy1113 (talk) 06:16, 20 August 2012 (UTC))