Talk:Laurence Edmondston

Review comments
Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

Espresso Addict 16:58, 11 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Template:Infobox Scientist should be added
 * Photograph/portrait etc should be added
 * Article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
 * Existing material needs reorganisation to reduce repetition
 * Information on research should be expanded
 * References should be expanded and converted to inline format
 * External links to useful online resources should be added if available