Talk:Laurie Hawn

Tone and neutrality
This article reads like it was written by the subject's press secretary. It requires a complete rewrite to be encyclopedic. - Ahunt (talk) 12:59, 15 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Had a rewrite of the article and I have removed the tone and neutrality tags, still needs lots more references. MilborneOne (talk) 20:16, 16 March 2011 (UTC)

Added citations for Parliamentary history. Also added citation for Edmonton Police Commission membership. StrathcoB (talk) 14:01, 1 June 2017 (UTC)

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