Talk:Lay You Down/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 15:40, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

Info box

 * No issues.

Lead

 * You don't mention that Prince is "iconic" in the main body of the article, so this is original research/bias. ✅
 * Removed "iconic".

Background

 * Re-title to Background and composition.✅
 * Decapitalise "keyboard"✅
 * You don't need to say Florida for a second time with regard to the mixing.✅

Critical reception

 * I think you could make a Chart performance section to be honest, or write some prose in the Charts section. When did it debut? What chart position? When did it peaked? How many weeks on the chart? Because this is the only chart it charted on, you can give a bit of trajectory.
 * I don't think there's enough information to make a separate section, seeing how it only appeared on one chart. Also, there's hardly any statistics or information regarding the song's charting, from any reliable sources, besides its charting position and date, meaning I can't really give it much trajectory. Basically I can't add any more to it, due to lack of information (in general).

Credits and personnel

 * I copy-edited this a bit. Thanks!

Charts

 * I copy-edited this a bit. Thanks!

Release history

 * I copy-edited this a bit. Thanks!
 * Add a column for the record label.✅

General

 * Add a picture of Prince maybe?
 * I tried, but it makes the article look awkward, creates a huge white space.


 * Are there no more reviews? Because the article is very short.
 * No that's all the reviews I could find. Like I said, major lack of information.

Summary
On hold :) Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 11:45, 23 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Again, thanks for the helpful review, your inputs always appreciated.  Rayman 95 |undefined (talk) 21:11, 23 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Passing. Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 15:30, 25 July 2012 (UTC)