Talk:Lazarus Aaronson/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:01, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Will review this. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 15:01, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * Can Christianity, economics and coronary heart disease be wikilinked?
 * Wikilinked coronary heart disease. Would consider it wp:overlinking to link the other two very well known and general terms.
 * widespread recognition he gained  --> widespread recognition, he gained 
 * Changed.

Life

 * Can tuberculosis, diabetes, socialist, economics, City of London College and coronary heart disease be wikilinked? No problem in repeating links from the lead.
 * Linked all, except socialist and economics
 * which occurred on 9 July 1938 "took place" would look better.
 * Well spotted. Changed.
 * She subsequently married the geriatrician Oscar Olbrich Does this need to be included?
 * Good point. Removed.
 * 1958/59 I think "or" is better than dash, if that is the meaning.
 * Clarified this.
 * more than twenty-five years  Numbers equal to or greater than 10 are typically kept in digits.
 * I think letters works in this instance as we are talking about a general more than twenty-five years, rather than a exact number of years.

Poetry

 * What is "left-leaning"?
 * "sympathetic to or tending towards the left in politics." The same word is used by the source to describe The Age
 * Can Christianity, Jew be wikilinked?
 * Not sure. I would probably consider that to be overlinking.
 * Duplink: Isaac Rosenberg
 * Might be worth linking twice, as there is som distance between the two mentions?
 * Some of his works also appeared in journals and in anthologies such as the 1953 Faber Book of Twentieth Century Verse. Source?
 * Fixed
 * Little scholarly attention have been  "has been"?
 * Fixed
 * Who are Jacobs and Baker? Have they been introduced anywhere by their full names?
 * Introduced earlier in the section by full name.

That should be all. A bit busy now, I think I will be able to get to this only by the end of this week. Cheers! Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 18:40, 27 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for reviewing. I will try to adress all points. Cheers – P. S. Burton  (talk)  01:46, 28 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Hi, found time for this today. Excellent, all issues resolved. I am happy to promote this. Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 05:59, 28 March 2016 (UTC)